Fishing for Answers

Posted: April 24, 2011 in My Poetry
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Throw thoughts
out into wide silence;
wait for some sort of response.

Cast.
Wait
Reel.

Prayer
feels like fishing
but what you reel in
doesn’t squirm or gasp;

lays quietly
a gift,
all yours,
to keep or
to release.

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Comments
  1. bluebee says:

    This is lovely – such skilful use of metaphor

  2. Steve says:

    Love the idea of casting a prayer to either keep or release, lovely poem Gay !

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